Thought sequence I

H αρχική ιδέα ήταν να φτιάξω ένα ποίημα από "περιβάλλοντα-environments", μάζες ήχου/ποιητικού υλικού, ένα ποίημα of enlarged spacing in nouvelle surrealistic visions. Tα περιβάλλοντα έπρεπε να είναι κινητικά, να μετατοπίζονται, ώστε να γίνονται η αφορμή για χορογραφία.

Τώρα στην δοκιμή αυτή βλέπω ότι μου βγαίνει σε spirals, spiralling spaces που το κάνουν πιό πολύ χωρο-χρονικό. 

Αθήνα 29/3/2011

28/3/2011

more of rescue
was disordinate
by uncomely
fractions
enacting
turmoil
became
common
to peruse
death
as life's
extension
alienated
by pelagic bureaus
they were
exordinate
to accept
a treaty
some language
puzzle
of inner
vision
inheritant
to all
viewees
of their
accomplishments

29/3/2011

by all means - were - heroes
inhabitants of space
in immigrant flows
of seaways
fighting
by sight
of disperpetuation
the spills
of history
of bare facts
as barkings
to nowhere
they made
a leaving mark
of all
respectfulness
cold months
were out - of - space
inordinate
glad
of other deaths.

2nd day stream

they were
photogenetic
in first instance
acquarious
had memory
of clay
world
was
warld
by fight
& fight
meant
light
Lazarus
Coundouriotes
father of fleet
another
Pavlos
& George
admired by all

2nd DAY

2nd day is a day of repose..did some other things earlier. this is what i did...find it in the next message.

1st Day- Poem written

HyDriots

(a poem in streams…)

they were

mechanical

of problem fatigue

HyDriots

made by environments

of materials

randomly set

inside sound

grouping of joints

asounder

fused seamlessly

filling spaces

of time

too fast

expanded

hybris

of low

gravitation

earthly mannerism

ancestors

were echoed

multiples

were occasionally

jammed

performed

in waves

arrangements

swerving

again

simpler

sequenced

surfaced

not enough

HyDriots

Riots

of waves

waters

turbulence

manifest

explosions

colours

vocouls

occults

multus

scouts

across

comets

of mind

herefore

patterns

breathing

reversal

ozoned

value

theory had perfect

valium

uphead

foremost

foreward

in heads

hydrias

hydraulics

most of happening

similar

to dances

disembodied

parallax

axis

defenced

centred

links

wander

again

cultures

across

fractions

finite

pronouns

half

tongues

of thought/                                            end of 1^st stream

inside tongue

a skeleton

of vision

a canceratti

most thrilling

avouched

undone

by memories

suckled

psyche

in His hands

perpetuum

child

born died

not see

father

or mother

mundus

had a minute

for him

died

by indifference

clip art

for kids

made by

the very young girl

a girl

e nato

maria senguvia

were born

in ombres

unfounded

of this world

the role of man

subordinates

the young girl

will take her

to inconceivable

light

to lights

penultimate

penumbria

astarate/                                                       end of 2^nd stream                                                      

ΗyDriots ... what about?

this is a weblog presenting my last poem "HyDriots" as it is lively created in the eyes of the audience. 

Audience is given the opportunity to follow poem & poet by similar engagement. Also, audience is given the opportunity to discuss with poet the course of writing this poem through all sequential phases. 

Although, the course is fun, it also becomes instructive for both poet/audience carriers.